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Lovescape or What Have You by !caesuras:iconcaesuras:





Lovescape or What Have You

To say the sun shines not on thy soft sound
Is cause for guilt within mine eyes, which cow'r.
Earth's Spring may jump with life from sky and ground,
Though life maintained in thee plants shame on flow'rs.
No thought or mind may grip thine own save mine,
For none see light, e'en though through darkness blinds;
See fit my guilt doth ground me for these crimes.
Such times try man to yield those weak in mind.
With shame I say, "My brothers do die there;"
Thoughts of you saved my starkly wounded soul.
Let us take arms, and in the world we share,
From since with love it was my heart you stole.
  Hours delay wits, for whims rule o'er the brain,
  But thoughts keep rank for both and check the strain.
©2006-2010 !caesuras
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You wish it was you.

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I'd really like to read one from you that wasn't a sonnet, to tell the truth.

You're better at them than he was, though. I'd thought you might like to know that.

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Don't listen to me.
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I haven't written anything since Hooked. It is a shame, really.

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Live a little, and then get Luvs.
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Neither have I, actually, besides the horrid piece in currently decaying away in my scraps. Poetry has ruined me; I mean to write prose again, once the will permits.

You and I should collaborate again sometime.

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Don't listen to me.
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They are beautiful every time.

I do not think poetry has ruined you, however. I believe you to be quite talented in that field.

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Live a little, and then get Luvs.
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Ruined me in the sense that I can't get back my old stride for prose, is what I mean, 'cause I've always loved prose more than poetry, in both the reading and writing aspects. I have to disagree with you there, though, for the simple truth that I'm not a very good poet. I mean, after all, I've never received one daily deviation. :'(

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Don't listen to me.
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Oh yeah...I forgot about that. Not until you get a daily deviation will you become a good poet. I am sorry for getting your hopes up.

lol but look how menny pageviews u got on teh first accownt!!!!!!11111111

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Live a little, and then get Luvs.
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On which account, mine? I have around 800, and all things considered, that isn't very high.

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Don't listen to me.
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Oh yeah. I was thinking of that !undefinability guy.

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Live a little, and then get Luvs.
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You motherfucker.

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Don't listen to me.

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